Having Second Thoughts... YET AGAIN!

Okay, so I'm kind of thinking right now. I have been re-reading my first draft and then these new ideas are coming up. Because I wanted the transition to have more impact (and I'm not just going to tell the story but highlight it in the whole plot), I'm thinking of re-routing my little plot. AGAIN.

I am convinced that Chapter 1 begins with old Rosa and Nigel, THAT I am sure of for now. I'm not opening up with the main characters but the story itself, which is quite the crucial factors in EVERY chapter 1s. So the thing I have to focus is the fluidity of my story--how to tell everything that happened in something more than the usual narrative. I'm going to play with the whole time and setting, that's for sure, because we're talking about two different leads. The one she was, and the one she is now. Which is quite different!

Now telling about that is somewhat hard. I don't know how to progress but I'm thankful that music is helping me out. It's really nice to see a fiercer character taking place of a dull, lifeless creature by her desk. The problem now is, to get everything into words. Which is really hard. Because after work, I'm really drained out of any creativity. So I have to push a little harder so that I can finish this, and finish it SOON.

C'mon imagination. Bear with me. Let's make this good! :)